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Weather Beaten

Written in reply to Carpe Diem #717, Weather Beaten.

          weather beaten
          wind pierces my body
          to the heart.
          -Basho-

          time to
          wish for a broken
          sandal.

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8 comments on “Weather Beaten

  1. Oh! Now this stops me in my tracks. Wow —!

  2. I like this response Mari T … it senses Karumi, the lightness of the poetry by Basho.

  3. That is very, very intriguing, raising all kinds of questions

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