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Kite

Written in reply to Carpe Diem #590, Kite.

          kite surfing
          along the shores of the lake—
          feeling free—at last.
          -Chèvrefeuille-

          beyond the cove
          a peony grows
          unfettered.

            copyright © 2014 by mari t.
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2 comments on “Kite

  1. It’s always a joy to read how you were inspired by the given prompt. This haiku is really a response from a different angle … thank you for sharing.

    • i’m not sure, but is the idea of renga or renku to take the poem in an unexpected direction while still maintaining some connection to the prior lines? this makes it the game (i think) it was designed to be. here, the words “free” and “unfettered” have nearly the same meaning.

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