Written in reply to Carpe Diem Special #113, Shiba.

          this summer
          the peonies bloom
          too early.

          I see his face in
          every bit of water.

            copyright © 2014 by mari t.
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10 comments on “Longing

  1. The longing is really strong.

  2. I’m envisioning drops of water on the peonies in which one can see the missing face…

    Longing for Something

  3. To see a loved one’s face everywhere.. that’s sadness.

  4. Gorgeous tanka/tan renga Mari t …

  5. Oh my–must follow now.

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