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Valley Stream

Written in reply to Carpe Diem “Time Glass” #7, Valley Stream.

          lazy willows,
          bathing roots in a
          sleepy river.

          the clopping of hooves
          on a wooden bridge.

            copyright © 2014 by mari t.
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9 comments on “Valley Stream

  1. I love reading a poem where I can actually see and hear what is written! 🙂

  2. Wonderful haiku, and nice addition for the tanka, real sound there.

  3. I really enjoyed this tanka … very well written … and I agree with Hamish the sound was a nice addition!

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